查看完整版本: 【黎明的尽头】1

如楼上某人所说，复活的质量的确有不如三部曲的地方，但本文却是异常精彩。
开头一如大片一般的悬疑，吊起读者的胃口，而后镜头一转，从战斗机转到民航飞机上，构思可谓巧妙。
天外兄的特点是多线，多个线索同时进行，让人应接不暇的伏笔和精彩的即时信息更让人不忍释卷。
好吧，说到人物就不能不提人妻了，作为天外兄笔下的人妻，一般不是悲剧了，就是太悲剧了。
这不，开篇就被人迷奸，话说迷奸也太容易了点吧。苏晨不跟着老公下楼也不是很合理，一般老婆会跟下去的。
另外如果开始不跟下去，后来也不会跟下去，会选择自己玩手机或看电视。
就这样吧，让我们期待苏晨怎么被虐，以及MQ怎么被虐，以及吕哲怎么咸鱼翻身吧。

第一次看楼主的大作，布局很大，描写也很有感觉，这种题材的H文很少见，希望继续看见楼主的后作。

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看来貌似是比较大型的谍战题裁的小说，是我喜欢的类型，希望楼主继续下去。

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看来貌似是比较大型的谍战题裁的小说，是我喜欢的类型，希望楼主继续下去。

军事题材的色文，还真是稀罕，好喜欢，再接再厉吧

飞星新作真是让人期待好久了，这个是灰色黎明续集吗？周旭是我比较喜欢的一个人物，为了自己的妻子，为了国家努力拼搏，生活在死亡的边缘，希望作者给力。

*** 作者被禁止或删除 内容自动屏蔽 ***

军事，谍战，色情，这简直都是我的最爱啊，作者吧这三种糅合了起来，我想我会被这篇文章给牢牢的吸住的

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从灰色三部曲开始关注飞星的作品，后来复活也特意找来欣赏，总的来说飞星的作品阳刚之气实足，与当前流行的淫妻类大异其趣。这篇黎明的尽头还刚开始，却已经有了长篇巨制的恢宏气派，值得关注。

哇靠，看剧情扑朔迷离啊，很想知道这个到底是谍战剧还是什么类型的哇。

飞星大大的文章，真的是可以称得上作品二字的！从之前的几篇，就可以看到，宏大的场景布局，缜密的情节，还有一个个鲜活的人物。特别是加入现实中真实的政治，军事元素，使得文章更具有可看性了。看来这篇的场景会是“全球流”，可能会比较艰难，但是，作为读者，会永远支持的！

天外飞星的作品都有看过，情色描写就不多说了，关键是故事情节也是扣人心弦，是不可多得的好文章！:excellence

天大又出新文了，估计又是悬疑色情类得吧。开头的情节和黄金眼的情节很像，不知道主人公遇到这个美女该怎么逃生，期待天大的后续更新！

这是谍战了啊，作者辛苦了，想到有这么好的题材，就是后续的写可能较为麻烦伤脑筋啊

能看到天外飞星大大的新作品问世是一件很让人高兴的事情，在下第一次看到飞星大大的作品是《灰色轨迹》，看完后马上被故事紧凑的情节精彩刺激的人妻出轨内容所吸引，对大大超绝的文笔及出众绝佳的文采更是佩服不已，后来又看完了大大的灰色三部曲及导火线等文章后，更是成为飞星大大的忠实读者或说是忠实粉丝，在此也向飞星大大道一声衷心的感谢，真是由于您的辛苦付出才让我们欣赏到了如此多精彩佳作，非常感谢飞星大大！
   看完本篇文章《黎明的尽头1》后，感觉文章的主题布局很大，内容题材好像更丰富了，加入了军事，谍战，特种部队，推理，悬疑等等内容，故事的发生地点好像也放在外国了，当然文章故事离不了精彩的人妻内容，床戏情节描写的很精彩刺激，本篇迷迷糊糊被洪世泰迷奸出轨的人妻苏晨不知道是不是故事的女主角，另外不知道随着续文故事情节的继续发展飞星大大会把整篇文章的重点放在推理悬疑内容上，还是把文章的情节重点放在人妻内容描写上呢，很是期待。上述一些拙见，可能有些肤浅，如有不足之处请飞星大大看后一笑而过！

中西合璧，写得蛮有看头的，就是情节发展的有点慢，不过描写都不错的。期待楼主继续更新。

女扮男装还有有点吸引眼球的，期待接下来的剧情

大大的文笔一如以前的好,情节安排也叫我们摸不着头脑,新书,一定要支持的

:excellence 支持飞星大大  等待黎明3 谢谢

越來越喜歡這裡了，每天一定有新的分享，感恩喔!! 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