| 该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2009-3-16 20:15 全显示 1楼 |
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| Eh?this is it where is the middle or end.hope you can make it go longer and somehow this sounds like a romance story. But so far the main idea is kind blury, it didnt seem to be a whole story it sounds more like a section of it. Well if you are planning to take a story from else where take the whole thing anyway thanks |
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