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衷心希望故事情节有所发展和突破。这样的月光更具魅力和欣赏价值。

作者不要急于更新，月光堪称佳作，视角独特，情节生动，极富想象力，静下心来说不定会有新的灵感和闪念出来。

女主角数量基本够用了，应该突出她们各自的特点上再丰富和加强，一点拙见而矣，呵呵
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